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    Active Member Revenant is on a distinguished road
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    my websites

    www.fotarmy.com
    www.revenant.vze.com
    www.rev.a1ss.net << just finished today
    www.roboriders9.com << im the guy wit the black sweater on the top left
    www.cw-meltingpoint.com

    opinions / suggestions ?

    i'm sure theres more, just cant remember right now, g2g
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    Newbie bravo6 is on a distinguished road
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    1. would not load site down?
    2. all i saw was html bg color code and text HUH?
    3. not a whole lot to it unfinished?
    4. unique site good layout maybe some color changes donno?
    5. best site your have listed briefly skimmed threw it, works well and fast

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    Active Member Revenant is on a distinguished road
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    yep, changed the host on revenant.vze.com and forgot to save the folder i had it saved on...so thats trashed. ill take the color changes into consideration, for which website though ?
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    Full Member cdingman is on a distinguished road
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    Personally I think the color schemes on each of them could use an overhaul IMHO.

    Chris Dingman
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    <A HREF="http://www.cabarettheatre.org" target="_blank">Cabaret Theatre</A><BR>
    <A HREF="http://www.twinlightdesigns.com" target="_blank">Twinlight Designs</A>

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    Active Member the illest is on a distinguished road
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    1. Needs a new color scheme.. otherwise looks good.
    2. No rating.. heh.
    3. Looks good... but where's the content?
    4. Don't get what it's for, don't like having to scroll to see the image.
    5. Probably the best out of the five, but your forums don't match the rest of the site at all.

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    Full Member HellFear is on a distinguished road
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    The design on FOT looks good. As others said, add more content and make a better color scheme.

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    Active Member Revenant is on a distinguished road
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    thanks for your guys' input, i'll respond swiftly when i catch some time.
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    Full Member gutchunks is on a distinguished road
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    not too bad .. the colors on a couple of em make me sea sick but thats easily fixed

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    Active Member bluzman32 is on a distinguished road
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    For fotoarmy, I don't like how the soldiers' guns are cut off by the text.

    CW-Meltingpoint has a nice intro movie and a nice logo. Nice and simple design. Good job.

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    Full Member tylercruz is on a distinguished road
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    Hi Revenant,

    1. www.fotarmy.com - Since this site uses PHPnuke, I will not critique it as I feel it is a 'template' site, and is meant to be 'complete' already.

    2. www.revenant.vze.com - The page cannot be found.

    3. www.rev.a1ss.net - This site is also down.

    4. www.roboriders9.com - Also down.

    5. www.cw-meltingpoint.com - Nice site. One suggestion I can make which I think will make quite a significant difference is to invest in a nice background for your gray 'sheet/newspaper' such as having rips and tears, signs of age, wrinkles, etc. This would bring more authenticity into your site and make it more fun at the same time.

    Cheers,

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